Set 12: Form, Structure & Sense (Advanced)
Explanation
PASSAGE
Recent studies show that the composer spent years refining the symphony, _______ each movement multiple times before declaring the work complete.
Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?
Detailed Answer Explanation
[Variation 1] This question tests your understanding of sentence function and text organization. 'Revising' is a present participle that forms a participial phrase, correctly adding detail about the refining process. Each sentence in a well-constructed text serves a specific purpose. Consider what role this sentence plays in the argument: does it introduce, support, contrast, or conclude an idea? Understanding why an author includes specific sentences helps you grasp the overall argument. Each sentence should serve a clear purpose: introducing ideas, providing evidence, acknowledging counterarguments, or drawing conclusions. Identify the role to understand the structure.
Key Evidence:
• "spent years refining the symphony"
• "each movement multiple times"
Why others are wrong: D ('And revises' mixes past 'spent' with present 'revises.'), A ('Revises' creates a comma splice with a new independent clause.), B ('Revised' without a subject creates an incomplete structure.).