In the late 18th century, the Industrial Revolution transformed manufacturing methods. The spinning jenny, the water frame, and the steam engine were a few inventions of this burgeoning era.

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Which choice most effectively combines the two sentences?

A

In the late 18th century, the Industrial Revolution transformed manufacturing methods: the spinning jenny, the water frame, and the steam engine were a few inventions of this burgeoning era.

B

In the late 18th century, manufacturing methods were transformed by inventions some inventions, such as the spinning jenny, the water frame, and the steam engine, were members of the burgeoning era.

C

In the late 18th century, the Industrial Revolution transformed manufacturing methods: for example, the spinning jenny, the water frame, and the steam engine.

D

A few inventions of the burgeoning era that took place in the late 18th century were: the spinning jenny, the water frame, and the steam engine; these inventions transformed manufacturing.

Correct Answer: A

Choice A is the best answer. It uses a colon to introduce the list of examples (inventions) that support the first clause.

Choice B is incorrect because it creates a run-on sentence. Choice C is incorrect because "for example" followed by a list is a fragment if not attached correctly. Choice D is incorrect because "that took place in the late 18th century" is redundant.